As John staggered out of the house he felt like he was soaring through a hundred different colors. And as he looked down the street he saw Mr. Johnson.
“Hey Mr. Johnson!” he yelled but as Mr. Johnson turned to presumably return it all John saw was a decaying face morphing and warping. It was a zombie invasion. And as soon as he saw it he ran down the street, screaming and yelling for help.
“What is it?” asked his friend Jude. She was short and pretty but of midget status with shoulder length brown hair.
“Zombie invasion! You have to believe me!” said John.
“Are you high?” asked Jude
“Well yeah, but old Mr. Johnson down the block-” but he was cut off.
“So your high?”
“Yeah, but-”
“Look you have to sober up with Jim.” And so it was that they took the seemingly long and dazed walk to Jim’s house, in actuality it was a hundred feet. As soon as they entered John was thrown into the basement and Jude left.
“Zombies man! Zombies-” yelled Jim.
“I know man! We need to get help!” yelled John
“But how?!” yelled Jim. Then it dawned on them.
“JUDE! JUDE! JUDE! HELP! ZOMBIES!” they screamed and knocked loudly on the door until Jude let them out.
“You guys really need to sober up” she said before letting out a scream as a decaying hand dragged her off.
“Jude!” they both yelled as they went to follow her grabbing kitchen knifes. As they turned the corner they saw Mr. Johnson’s zombie holding her hostage, gun to her head.
“auuga, auuga!” it said.
“What is it saying?” Jim asked
“I think it wants a donut” said John
“You have one?” asked Jim
“Yes but its mine!” said John
“You want to save her?” asked Jim
“Yes” said John
“Then we have to make sacrifices!” he yelled throwing it from the shadows at its head.
“auuga, auuga” came from the shadows.
“Now what?” asked Jim
“Let’s kill it” said John
And they both popped out of the shadows yelling “abra cadabra, I hate zombies go away!” they said as he fell to the ground.
“You guys saved my life, thank you!” yelled Jude as she hugged them both.
“No need to hug us, this is just what zombie hunters do every day” said Jim
“But he was kidnapping me not eating me and that donut was hard and made him distracted when it hit his head and then I shot HIM” said Jude
“What ever you have to tell yourself Jude” said John as he and Jim proceeded to go upstairs.
“Ok, I guess I’ll file the police report” yelled Jude after them a little mad that they left her behind. And she wondered, “How do we explain them high and convinced there’s a zombie invasion to the cops and any one else who may come?”
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I think it is a very interesting story for sure, gets kind of cloudy in parts and i got a little lost. But u have a rediculos imagination bro, like its wack. Id say probably to add a little bit more of a plot to the begging so you could extend it longer and get more backround on why there were high, that would b interesting to know. Tasty.
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ReplyDeleteThis was a very interesting story. I don't think that you have to mention that the two characters are high, it gets a little confusing. In order to make this in to a longer story you could use more details to describe how the people turn into zombies, and what they act like when they are zombies. Also, maybe you can make more people turn into zombies and describe what the two characters do in order to save people from being killed by the zombies.
ReplyDeletenice job- you get a little too intense at times and it kind of ruins a suspense buildup and climax, but you have very creative ideas. i'd suggest trying to figure out a way to lead up to the zombie invasion and add some setting.
ReplyDeletegood job. i like your story. you are very creative. dont get caried away. keep it up
ReplyDeleteWell, this is absolutely nothing like I have ever read before. It's very creative and interesting but I feel as if you need to add a little more action to it. And describe more about how he is high or maybe add more about how Jude was kidnapped. Can't wait to read more!
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ReplyDeleteWell, thanks for not letting us down. It's always exciting to read a Mike Hand masterpiece. I agree with some of the comments above. We could use some more explanation of what's going on and why. I don't think the characters should be "high." Instead, give them each some more background so that we can identify with them. Also, work on the setting a bit more to clarify if this is the future, the past, an alternative reality, etc.
Yet, another great story from the one, the only, Michael Hand. Great story, this could become a very intense and spectacular read. Try expanding it, who the characters are, their past, the job as a zombie hunter, etc. Good luck!
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